Friday, November 2, 2012

JoyRiders page 44


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3 comments:

Colin Tedford said...

Oh man, this is one of those layouts that pulls me out of a story by making me figure out which direction I'm supposed to read in.

Carl Meff said...

That's a very legit point, but sometimes that happens when you take risks in new types of layouts. of course if you can't take risks and experiment in a webcomic, where can you?

Colin Tedford said...

Sure, sure. Actually on second reading I think if you just widened the vertical gutters it would make the reading path fairly obvious.